needing assistance on assignment below i have attached of what i submitted but was incorrect

Here is the comments from my professor and attached is the paper that I submitted. I needed redone according to his comments.

The assignment was: Dropbox: Submit a review of the literature chapter of your thesis to your professor in the week 3 dropbox. A few things for you: -I’m not sure what thisi is, but it’s not a lit review. You need 5-8 pages, and need to actually review literature -include your references with each assignment, especially a literature review…. -you need to redo this for your thesis paper